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I think that is a fine answer. +1 from me and good luck

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The app looks good. and your document looks great. Just one question before I rate it. What would you do incase you do not get the amount of helpers you need for an event?

+1 good guy, good app and good vibe

I think that the most important thing about this app is lacking. Planns which are well thought out. I do not see how you want to make the 21st twice as active through just asking and pushing officers and NCO's. Its is a good (maybe unrealistic) goal to have This goal sounds like you would put a lot of work on the shoulders of your officer and NCO's. Also, are there no other plans? Things you want to stay the same or change? This would improve your app a lot. I am missing this kind of information right now. Secondly, you have a been in a lot of battalions, but most of the experience is not worth telling about? Why do you even mention this? Is there really nothing you could have learned from the systems which are used in different battalions? -1 from me for now.

Your app looks good. I just got some questions before I rate it. First off all, what would you do when you don't get the amount of event jobs that you want? Secondly, what would you do if they don't hack the droids who are driving the barcs? (chapter 2 of the document) Thirdly, 15-20 minutes for a deployment is really short. I would recommend timing this later during the event depending on how fast the players go through it. This way you make it possible for them to get the good ending. Lastly. Have you thought of making this a 2 story event when they get the bad ending? You could make it so that need to follow havoc squad and save them during a different deployment. Edit: I just read your answers. Your plan is well thought out. And your idea is good. +1 from me Tip: When I started hosting my first event I started doing one for my own battalion. I told them that it would be my first event and I got some helpers to help me host this small deployment. While everyone had fun and it was a decent deployment it was great way to for me to learn. Since you are new to hosting deployments it could be nice to host smaller ones in the beginning. This way it is easier to control the troops who are deployed.

+1 Sixta believes in you and your plans. And they seem good. Best of luck

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+1 cool idea

I think it is made to be for SOBDE or troops who can detect cloacked enemies. I also don't see what the current issue is with ARF. Heavy just has an extra weapon, medics get medical tools, support gets more tools and most of them are fixated on RP and ARF gets a sniper which is actually fine. -1

+1 good event idea and great app

I do not have acces to the document and your aplication is really short and does not tell me a lot about you and what you want to do as a gm. Therefore I cannot rate this.

+1 Good app. Go for it!

+1 Welcome back

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+1 Good app

+1 Goodluck

Brian Limmond

+1 Good luck

+1 good luck

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+1 What conrad said

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