Kain

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh That makes sense.

@Jek

You're not getting what I am saying. In those cases That "criticism" was literally just saying I'm doing things wrong without specifying. Every single fucking time drama happens, I instantly start trying to fix It, talking with Trig, multiple talks with Llama, talking to Reaper. But somehow I don't take any criticism? And I'm baffled where I can't take shit seriously or I don't have any patience. That is why I'm finding this bullshit.

Then why am I fucking not told huh? It's hard to fix shit without being told what the fix.

Fuck this. Close it. I'm tired of bullshit following me and telling me that I can't fucking take feedback when I'm not told what to fix at all. The biggest reason I want to be staff is to help bring a lot of originality because I noticed that I can't always bring my ideas to a game makers and I wanted to work for that. To say that I have no patience is bullshit, for a year and 7 months I worked in the 501st to eventually get to my position and I didn't quit once. And my reputation exceeds me? For wanting to help not only with game makers about helping around with stories and all of this but wanting to really help with application processes on Game makers (because I'm really dedicated to helping them). I also wanted to help with the very tainted image that staff have on them. I want to help them. And the only time I don't take criticism is when I know completely that something is bullshit, so I defend myself. You can ask Jackson or Woeny that is listen to a shit ton of their criticism and from many many other people.

You're a good leader and obviously capable, but the event is very lackluster for a proposal. Don't sell yourself short, take a look at the new possible event maps and make something immersive, not just a shoot em up. You can make very impact shoot 'em ups, I've made them many times in the past. What I want to see is your originality and creativity to ensure you can be a successful game maker. However, unless there's a lot more detail, I'll stay with this opinion. -1, lack of story.

Oh

I would give a -1, but it's honestly been a while since a infestatstion event.

-1, repetitious and doesn't make any sense lore wise. Deathwatch doesn't just attack random republic vessels for possibly data. You should try for something more original, weave some roleplay into it.

Edited. Came off differently than intended. This should give a better understanding of what I was trying to say.

RP Name: 501st Legion SMB Jesse Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:68089714 Age: 17 Gender: How dare you ask (Male) Timezone: GMT -4 Tell us why you wish to be an administrator (6 sentence minimum): The main reason why I truly wish to become an administrator is to direct myself to the game makers branch. I've found many issues and I wish to help and assist a lot with the game makers. In the past, I've worked with many different game makers (Even Joah at one point ) and I feel like I can give some advise and help how to make the game makers branch even better. On the other hand, I also wish to help with keeping entertainment, finding out ways to entertain players without the use of events and try to create small and interesting roleplay scenario. I also wish to help give advise to lower ranking staff, there's been a lot of issues that players have been consistently addressing and I wish to personally address them and give fair criticism. There's a lot of taint right now against staff and I want to help rebuild that image. So, in short, I wish to entertain the player base through more options and build the view on lower ranking staff personally with them. Tell us a little about yourself (3 sentence minimum): I'm usually describes as someone who can come off as really goofy, but when the time comes, I can be very mature and know when to make the right decision. I am a very strict person and don't take bullshit. I'm a very heavy roleplayer and have played on various strict role-playing servers in the past (such as DayZRP). I'm a massive fan of lore in Star Wars and trying to bring immersion. I love writing stories and trying to find new and original ideas. That's me. Do you have any previous staff experience? I once was a head admin on a DarkRP server for a few months a long time ago. Also, I'm currently on an LOA until Monday. However, I can probably squeeze in doing my interview during that time if I get accepted. Addition, upon my return, I'll get one of my two slaves from the 501st to train me on being a trainer.

This will be a very similar situation to Soul's application. I'll just put most of the same thing over here. I'm going to be very blunt. I feel that anyone who is proposing to be a gamemaker, you really should try to be as original as possible. There isn't a reason, a motive, a story or anything in this event. If you want to propose an event to something like game maker, make it really in detail. Have something that pleases both sides; incredible roleplay and incredible firefights. Don't just limit yourself to an idea on the venator, you can think of one of the event maps. One thing you lack in with this event is motive, they don't just come on to a random venator for random data, that's far too risky and costy. Think realistically. Right now what we need the most is really heavy roleplay because we are really, really lacking it on the server. Additionally, people overuse having Asajj and Dooku together. They RARELY fought with each other. So, until I see change in it, I will give a... -1

Especially how what we need the most for the server is roleplay. We don't need more shoot 'em ups. We need original ideas with stories that are flexible and really intrigue people. AND NOT PEOPLE WHO JUST SUDDENLY HAVE PERMISSION TO COME ABOARD THE SHIP.

I'm going to be very blunt. I feel that anyone who is proposing to be a gamemaker, you really should try to be as original as possible. Now, that being said, you do have the interesting aspect of adding the one-life event aspect, but everything else is unoriginal. There isn't a reason, a motive, a story or anything. If you want to propose an event to something like game maker, make it really in detail. Have something that pleases both sides; incredible roleplay and incredible firefights. Don't just limit yourself to an idea on the venator, you can think of one of the event maps. So, until I see change in it, I will give a... -1

It's a good concept, but I have a strong feeling this can be executed very poorly. My major recommendation is when it comes to tooling with them, don't make it very obvious. So, instead of just going, "YOU ARE NOW TRAPPED, GUARDS, FETCH." do this. Have them just locked in there. Cut out the lights (Increase fog) and have panic spout. Start opening negotiations and eventually bring out a detail which says there is a traitor among the troopers. This is spout distrust and panic. Through the entire time, continue to toy with them, make them think anything could happen. At some point, overload their comms with seering sounds so they can't communicate. Pretty much, really fuck with them. Nearing the end of the toying, make it so he begins his departure and activates the droid factory. This is when all the battalions will get ambushed and attacked at once. Then in a minute in, set the factory to self-destruct. You say you want RP, but you need to be careful about how to weave a shoot 'em up into a RP scenario.

Actually, they wanted me to stay or they said they'd go c:

Step up bitch, you messing with the wrong neighborhood.

I think @aStonedSparks might be a bit of an idiot. Not only did 501st use jetpacks in the past, but my deal is with something else. Marines ARE NOT the only one who can survive in space. At all. The phase 2 clone trooper armor only required an additional respitory. We saw this being used during the battle of Ringo Vinda. Still love You, Sparks. I'm just a lorewhore

lmao That's like saying, "I have a lot of experience in 501st Legion PBUG"

Being an XO under Tup wouldn't be such an achievement Ecccks deeee

I'll give ya a chance to fix this. I can barely read it.

+1, Max, you've been one of the most influential individual I've ever met since back when you were a Vice Admiral. You and I have roleplayed together so many times since that point and you showed so much care to the community that surrounded you. You've always been a person that I've cared for a lot, but I rarely see you do things now. All I've seen is the tournaments. Quite frankly, it's sad from what I remember.

Wolf pack don't do interrogations ECKKS DEE

I guess you could say the Shadow Company battalion commander is going into the shadows ECCS DEE. Also, did you know they've been predicting that power in Flordia is going to be down for roughly a month, yeah?

Can you expand on your name? I'm still confused of what you are.