2/4 Nice idea, confusing and the fact you put him inside quinlan and essentially kept resurrecting him means he's literally walking in the corpse of quinlan.
I have some ideas if anyone is interested in hosting my events. This https://synergyroleplay.com/forums/topic/19632-second-battle-of-geonosis/ as well as other more original story ideas. Some story to add on to more then simple shooting events.