Corey's Staff Application

[Corey]

RP Name:
TR 501st PLTL 2ndLT Corey

 

Steam ID:
STEAM_0:0:101009643

 

Age:
14

 

Gender:
Male

 

Timezone:

Eastern

 

Tell us why you wish to be an administrator (6 sentence minimum):
I want to be part of the staff team because I love the community so much. I want to help the people and the community out and make gameplay and role-play on the server better then it is. I also want to join the staff team is because I really want to do more on the server and help players with making their role-play better.I just really want to help the server with anything I can do to make it better. I also want to become game master and make a lot of fun events. So the server has more events for the community. 

 

Things I will do as a new admin

 

I would make things fair when doing a ticket and use professionalism, I would be calm and do it right.

I would make the community better by helping with getting rid of minges and dealing someone that breaks the rules.

if I do become vet admin I would make the community even better by making events that are fun, so everyone enjoys the event and the server. 

 

Tell us a little about yourself (3 sentence minimum):
I am 14 years old. I am in FRC aka Robotics. I have been committed to this server since I joined. Matter of fact is that this is my first star wars server and I love it a lot. I do Programming and been gaming for years. I am very active in this community and has as much fun as I can. I'm very committed to the community. I am very good at talking to people and is great with handling citations

Do you have any previous staff experience?
I don't have a staff history

 

Activity:

Every Single Day, unless I'm grounded then I cant get on or if I'm out of town 

 

(if you want more detail I will edit this app and have more, a lot more detail)

Edited October 26, 2017 by Corey Cole
edit recommended by a comment

[Baller]

+1 Active AF. (So much pilot training) would make a good addition to the staff team.

[Hobo]

+1

[Patrick]

+1
One of the THE most hardest working trooper in the 501st, Always strive to improve and learn from his mistakes.

[Nap]

+1 ive seen him do good

[Ccmonty]

+1

[Max]

+1  Sure

[Justin3454]

+1 Hard working and active, just needs experience and training

[Esitt]

Its finally in the right place mate! Congratulations! anddddd +SUPPORT

[Corey]

11 hours ago, Esitt said:

Its finally in the right place mate! Congratulations! anddddd +SUPPORT

Yea thx for the +1 mate

[Black]

+1

[Seven]

-1

- Application has a generic feel. Nothing you listed is unique to your abilities. All you said is that you wanted to help the server and how much you like the server. If you really want to help than explain all the things you would do once you got your role of moderator. An Application is suppose to intrigue a recruiter and make them want to interview them. This application had no unique aspects to it. I would go back and add a lot more and include what I listed above because it can help your chances of getting picked higher.

No harsh feelings I'm just trying to help,

Best of luck on your application

~ Seven

[Corey]

13 minutes ago, Seven said:

-1

- Application has a generic feel. Nothing you listed is unique to your abilities. All you said is that you wanted to help the server and how much you like the server. If you really want to help than explain all the things you would do once you got your role of moderator. An Application is suppose to intrigue a recruiter and make them want to interview them. This application had no unique aspects to it. I would go back and add a lot more and include what I listed above because it can help your chances of getting picked higher.

No harsh feelings I'm just trying to help,

Best of luck on your application

~ Seven

I have added more info on what I would do if I became a new admin. plz give feed back on this edit. I can add much more. 

Edited October 26, 2017 by Corey Cole

[Seven]

8 minutes ago, Corey Cole said:

I have added more info on what I would do if I became a new admin. plz give feed back on this edit. I can add much more. 

Nice, i appreciate you going back into your application to add some more detail in. It does look a little messy though so if you cleaned it up it will be a huge improvement from your original application. Try running your application through a grammar application as well to help with the grammar. I suggest grammarly because its pretty easy to use.

[Corey]

4 minutes ago, Seven said:

Nice, i appreciate you going back into your application to add some more detail in. It does look a little messy though so if you cleaned it up it will be a huge improvement from your original application. Try running your application through a grammar application as well to help with the grammar. I suggest grammarly because its pretty easy to use.

noted

 

[Corey]

26 minutes ago, Seven said:

Nice, i appreciate you going back into your application to add some more detail in. It does look a little messy though so if you cleaned it up it will be a huge improvement from your original application. Try running your application through a grammar application as well to help with the grammar. I suggest grammarly because its pretty easy to use.

 

thank you for your feedback. I did what you suggested and I think it looks way better

[Seven]

4 minutes ago, Corey Cole said:

thank you for your feedback. I did what you suggested and I think it looks way better

Looks a lot better, just needs some grammar fixes and i dont know if they want seperate sections within the application other than the ones they provided.

[Jackson]

Accepted for Interview! You have until 11/3/17 to contact an overseer+ for your interview.

[Jackson]

Application accepted! Welcome to the staff team!