Alec's Intel Theft

[Alec]

Name: Alec

Who helped (If applicable): Avavel, Blank, Forseen, Ike

Event Name: Intel Theft

Summary of the story: Some commandos sneaked on the ship to steal the data the 115th had provided to the venator, The Commandos failed and asked for reinforcements. The CIS ultimately lost

What was the result of the event?: CIS was defeated and data not stolen

Was this more of a role play oriented or "shoot em up" oriented event: Shoot em up

 

[Firat/Abi]

+1 but more action for CG pls 

[Tommen]

+1

[Ruin]

+1 No idea what was happening but it was cool

[Kimon]

+1 liked the event but not much for SO to do

[Alsanark]

+1  Action and Nice Touch of Story

[Neo]

+1

[Notmisfit]

-1 and here is why

- story was alright but kind of was all over the place

- add more atmopsheric substences such as bombings, sounds, music, and alarms

- npc spawns did not make sense because they where spawning right behind people when people cleared out those areas and etc

- empathesis on music!

[Alec]

1 minute ago, misfit said:

-1 and here is why

- story was alright but kind of was all over the place

- add more atmopsheric substences such as bombings, sounds, music, and alarms

- npc spawns did not make sense because they where spawning right behind people when people cleared out those areas and etc

- empathesis on music!

I appreciate the feedback and a proper reason, I will try to improve in the future :)!

[Notmisfit]

30 minutes ago, Alec said:

I appreciate the feedback and a proper reason, I will try to improve in the future :)!

you're welcome