BigZach Posted October 13, 2018 Report Share Posted October 13, 2018 Name: BigZach Who helped (If applicable): Lucifer Event Name: Build Up Summary of the story: This is starting up a story line that I am aspiring to do. A probe enters MP with a run down droid. This droid spits gibberish. The droid was sent from a distant moon from a place called BASE ZETA. The ship was tagged to the collective. What was the result of the event?: Some passive RP. And development of story Was this more of a role play oriented or "shoot em up" oriented event: RP "I'm not toxic. You're just making it really hard to not treat you like an idiot." - Logic Link to comment
Starfox Posted October 13, 2018 Report Share Posted October 13, 2018 +1 The Clover Crew Member Link to comment
[SR] Monnk [A] Posted October 13, 2018 Report Share Posted October 13, 2018 (edited) It was a good start up though it will be interesting where this story goes, now in terms of the feedback: Positives It had people involved that would normally be ignored due to where they are stationed on the ship, this allowed those to get used to different situations. It was a good build up to the "story" that you want to tell as it has a clear way forward, it leaves more to the imagination. When it comes to things like story telling I believe that having a clear "start" is a good way to get the players interested and leaving them wanting more. Negatives I believe that instead of Naval saying "We will send allies" I believe that it should of been put as "We will send our scouts soon" [This may be completely out of your control if so then I do not have any Negatives] Edited October 13, 2018 by Monnk 1 Report Link to comment
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