Seven

So what your saying is the reason he wants to be staff is to whitelist people when they tryout for arc and so that he can setup trainings, ect? You can use other staff members for that. Staff are to help out the community in whole and your main purpose to join shouldn't be to support one battalion.

what does that have to do with anything?

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he added them in, check the video but I don't really care and this point

-1 - your reasoning for applying was really messy with a lot of grammar mistakes but you did say you had a southern accent along with a lisp, im not sure if that affects your grammar or not but ill just ignore the grammar part for now. - your application was very generic. You said how you wanted to help players, and how you want to stop minges, ect which isn’t a bad thing at all, its just you didnt describe your self on those topics. You just typed it. Now i know the saying “actions speak louder than words” but by describing what you will do to help out players and the server, will further back you up when you actually do the things you said in your application if you get accepted. That will show that your a man of your word. As you said how admins are their to help out which is true, everyone can help out new players without being a moderator or an administrator. no harsh feelings, best of luck on your application ~ Seven

Thats a bold statement to be proclaiming that everyone plagirizes lore. Thats kind of harsh don’t you think? To the ones that didnt plagirise? And actually when i used to rp full time i did memorize the full sith code so yes it can be done. Again you aren’t proving any good points and this has turned into a useless debate at this point.

Neutral - i am neutral as of now but my opinion may change. - i liked what you pointed out about why you want to be staff, but i just wish you explained yourself more. Describes your points a little better and i might change my vote. no harsh feelings, best of luck on your application, ~ Seven

+1 - you seem like a great kid, straight A’s, atheltic, what are you missing?? Haha anyways - good quality on your application, good sources of experience. Iv had experience playing on garnet and it is a pretty established server along with its staff team. As well as good reasoning behind why you want to be staff. best of luck on your application ~ Seven

Looks a lot better, just needs some grammar fixes and i dont know if they want seperate sections within the application other than the ones they provided.

#1 i mean that is what being biast is so your just confirming what i said, and #2 i dont get what your trying to get at me. You being the 1st director doesnt suade my opinion. God knows if the 90% of the battalion commanders you picked read off a website for their application (not saying any of them did all). And by you saying that i shouldnt debate with you because you made this format comes to show that you see nothing wrong with plagirising lore.

How, i didn’t insult or come out to anyone as a bad person, i just stated information that i knew was true. Sorry that i was the only one to bring this up but im not going to follow everyone else and put +1 just cause i know the guy

Alright and get where your getting at and i wish him the best of luck in his interview if he gets accepeted. I just dont see the point in putting something down that you dont have to let alone was plagiarized. Hopefully he fixes his mistake but for him to put something down like that and to find out it was plagiarized makes me question if he is fit for this role.

-1 - nothing you listed has anything to do with being a staff member. All you talked about was the battalions and how you would make them better as staff - im extremely confused on what you where getting at in your application. No harsh feelings, best of luck on your application ~ Seven

+1 - you explained why and your reasoning behind what is driving you to be a staff member which is great. Im a supporter of your intentions of being a staff member. best of luck on your application ~ Seven

You knowing gene on a personal level, #1 makes your arguments against me completly biast, but #2 him going through some shit doesnt have to do with him deciding on copy lore word for word from the wikipedia to his application. And if lore was mandatory in applyin for a commander position than why is it asked in the format? I dont mean to seem harsh or hostile to you in any way but you have nothing to back your opinion up other than that hes gona through some tough times.

All i did was point out that he took lore word for word from the wikipedia. It asks if you understand the lore and by copying it from the wikipedia doesn’t prove anything. If he wanted to out down lore from the wikipedia he should have used “” because it just looks like he stole them. Incase you forgot what plagiarism means VVVVV pla·gia·rism ˈplājəˌrizəm/ noun noun: plagiarism; plural noun: plagiarisms the practice of taking someone else's work or ideas and passing them off as one's own. synonyms: copying, infringement of copyright, piracy, theft, stealing; informalcribbing "accusations of plagiarism"

Nice, i appreciate you going back into your application to add some more detail in. It does look a little messy though so if you cleaned it up it will be a huge improvement from your original application. Try running your application through a grammar application as well to help with the grammar. I suggest grammarly because its pretty easy to use.

How is it a pointless -1, he went to wikipedia and copied down lore word for word. Where is the effort in that. I didnt say his application should be punished for that. And the fact that you said %99.999999 of the lore come froms wikipedia is not true. Their was a whole clone wars series you know aswell as books that are canon. And i know that not everyone knows every little detail in the lore, but why include it in your application if you dont know it off the top of your head in the first place.

-1 - its great and all that you want to be with your friends but you do know as an administrator your not prone to make sims and events. Sims are for battalions to run and events are for game makers. - your 2 main points of your application had to deal with making the server fun and getting more people on the server. Both can be done without a staff role. Your role as a staff member is to take help or needs of the players on the server. Yes i guess by being a staff member and doing your job correctly you will in the long run make for a better experience on the server which will make players want to stay, but you should probably include that in your application and explain yourself more. no harsh feelings to you personally, best of luck on your application, ~ Seven

-1 - Application has a generic feel. Nothing you listed is unique to your abilities. All you said is that you wanted to help the server and how much you like the server. If you really want to help than explain all the things you would do once you got your role of moderator. An Application is suppose to intrigue a recruiter and make them want to interview them. This application had no unique aspects to it. I would go back and add a lot more and include what I listed above because it can help your chances of getting picked higher. No harsh feelings I'm just trying to help, Best of luck on your application ~ Seven

+1 - Great amount of detail in the application. I feel you answered the questions truthfully and to the best of your ability. Everything you listed you had background knowledge to back it up with. Best of luck on your application, ~ Seven

-1 (Plagiarism) - The video provided shows the plagiarism used in the application. I'm surprised no one else thought to check for plagiarism, especially the forum staff. I hate to be the bad guy in situations but the way you wrote the lore was to obvious to me that it was plagiarized. I've worked with threads like this before. Hopefully this doesn't hurt your application to bad but you made a mistake and I feel you should go back and write what you actually know about the lore, not what a Wikipedia knows. ~ Seven https://www.quetext.com/report/ac00a0b60d542821c1a9 https://www.quetext.com/report/78c240cdfad6ebd772ae https://www.quetext.com/report/62f6d6f364a4e901e703 Plag.mp4

-1 wrong section, and even for a moderator application, their is little to no detail, and the detail you have listed is to generic.